The Lost Prince Updated Part – 1

PART – 1

A woman, who was hiding her face in the veil of a blanket, was running madly in raining night. Her breaths were uneven still she can’t relaxed. Even for a second. She was scared and her wound is bleeding. But she don’t care about it. This time her breaths are important but not because she cares for it. She had a responsibility. And to fulfill them it’s very necessary she would keep herself alive. At least she should be able to survive for the time she needs to reach other state.

After crossing a large river, she had to cross an area of forest. Afterwards she needs to show her identity to the gatekeeper soldiers of that state. Or else they wouldn’t let her inside the state.

She saw a boat on the bank of river. She quickly untie the rope and sail it into the river. She was constantly looking behind. She was definitely running from someone. But darkness envelope the whole area. It’s hard to find the way but she did. She don’t leave her courage. It’s not a time to show any kind of weakness.

She sail the boat using all her remaining power. Soon she reached to the other side and leave the boat in hurry. Due to rain the road is muddy and slippery. She got hurt but ignored and keep going on.

Forest is dark and dangerous. She firm her grip on her dagger whose edges were already dipped in blood stains. Any danger could appear before her in this fearful night. Any robber or fierce animal would attack her. She was looking all around and just running in full pace.

Soon she covered the forest sucessfully. And reached the border of the state. “Kon ho tum. Or is samye yaha kyu aai ho?” One soldier asked her.

“Mujhe mere bhai se milna hai. Kripa kar mujhe jane deejiye.” She requested them to let her inside the state.

“Kon ho tum? Apni pechan do?” Soldiers asked about her identity.

She told them and one soldier took her to a house inside the state. He knocked and one man opened the door.

“Vidya, yaha or is haal meโ€ฆ?” The person was shocked seeing the condition of his sister.

“Mere pas samye nahi hai. Bas tum meri amanat sambhalo. Ye ab tumhara uttardaaitav hai. Lo sambhalo.” She handed a basket to the man and told him that it was her precious treasure for which she trusted him the most.

“Par tum kaha ja rahi ho? Tumhari avstha bhi theek nahi lag rahi?” He was tensed seeing her conditions.

“Meri chinta na karo. Bas ise sambhal ke rakhna. Samaran rahe ye meri amanat hai tumhare pas.” She kept remding him not to worry about her but take care of her possession. She said and ran away. Lost in the darkness

He was trying to catch her but she just ran awayโ€ฆ.

After 15 years.

Aryanagar a huge and powerful kingdom. Who is ruled by a king Daksh. He is very brave and wise king. His people respect him a lot.

“Rajkumar Angad kaha hai?” King Daksh asked from the servant?

“Maharaaj, Rajkumar apne mitro ke sath mele gaye hai.” Servant told him that prince went to see fair with his friends.

“Jaise hi wo laute unhe humare pas bhej dena.” He ordered him.

“Jee Maharaj.”

“Angad tumhe maharaj ko bata dena chahiye tha.” One of his friend told to the prince.

“Ha taki wo hume aane hi nahi dete.” Prince replied and both shook their head.

“Kya tumne apne pitaji ko btaya hai?” He asked to his friends.

“Ji Rajkumar. Hum dono bata kar aaye hai. Warna maa or baba chinta karte.” Both told him.

“Mata shree ko to humne bhi btaya hai. Par Pita ji kehne ka sahas nahi hua.” Angad told his helplessness, as he is sacred of his father’s anger.

All riding their horse in full pace and their soldiers left behind as all were much more faster than the soldiers came with them for their security.

“Sainik to bahut pichhe reh gaye.” One of them said and all smiled. It was their actual plan to enjoy the fair without any security.

“Achha hua. Ab hum teeno araam se mela dekh payenge.” Angad said and all paced their horses.

All three reached to the fair which was very famous and so beautiful. Many artists were came there to show off their talent and earn some money. Many different stalls grabbed their attention and they enjoyed it most.

“Rajkumar wo khel jeette hai.”

“Ha chalo.” All three went to a stall to play a game. They hit the target one after another and won the game.

All three were perfect in hitting the target.

“Dekha humara nishana kitna sahi tha.”

“Wo to mera bhi tha.”

“Ha jaise maine to kuchh kiya hi nahi..”

All three were praising themselves and lost in the enjoyment of fair.

15 year old prince and his two friends were very sharp and active. They want to win and show it to king. As soon their raajguru is coming to take them to gurukul. Afterwards they will return only when they all were capable of taking the responsibilities of the kingdom…

19 thoughts on “The Lost Prince Updated Part – 1

  1. Nisha says:

    Yeee congratulations baby for new story ๐Ÿฅณโค๏ธ
    super and interesting start . curious to know who is Vidya and why she ran away after giving her possession to someone and told him to take care of her possession. time passed and 15 year old rajkumar angad and his friends went to a fare to enjoy .
    eagerly waiting for next part .

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  2. coderlady says:

    What was Vidya’s story? Who was she running from? What did the basket contain? I guessed it would be a baby. The lost prince?

    Then we have prince Angad. He and his friends are away from security and going to a local fair. Something will happen there. But what?

    Will they run into someone?

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  3. A Curious Start

    Vidya was in some problem running from someone
    but she indeed wanted to save her baby
    15 years later
    Prince Angad and his friends wanting to enjoy themselves without
    any security of the soldiers
    I’m wondering if the baby would be Geet or Maan

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  4. Congrats on your new story ๐Ÿ‘
    Vidya is in danger
    So she wants to save her baby
    She somehow successfully reached her destination and handover her baby to her brother and warned him to take care of him
    15 saal baad
    Rajkumar Angad apne apne friends ke saath mele Mai enjoy karne ke liye apni security ko ditch karke chala jaata hai
    Rajkumar Angad apni mom ko vata Kar aata hai
    But he is scared of his father angered
    So he doesn’t inform him
    Interesting start ๐Ÿค”

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  5. loveaparna3011 says:

    very interesting n curious story
    what possasion vidya gave to her brother
    is vidya related to rajkumar angad
    angad ditch his security with his friends to enjoy fair hope everything will be fine n nothing danger around angad .

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  6. ne1234 says:

    Congratulations on ur new story..๐Ÿฅณ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅณ
    Who were behind Vidya and why she was escaping from her land to another land for the safety of her posession,is her posession a baby girl or boy,is it her child and who is behind her,is she related to royalty or any indirect connection,and the time too passed,is she still alive somewhere or not,so looking forward to see the unveil of each mystery……๐Ÿค๐ŸŒผ

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  7. Superb interesting start who is vidya is she maan s mom Or what y was she running and wat did she have in d basket was it maan Or geet waiting to see hw d story unfolds from here. Who is prince angad waiting to see more from where it can be seen that he is a brave prince but is afraid of his father so only he didn’t inform to his father about going out there they won d price also story looks really interesting waiting for next.

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  8. Congratulations baby for new story ๐ŸŽ‰๐Ÿฅณ
    awesome start . a woman Vidya was running , looks like she wanted to save herself and her possession from someone !! curious to know who is she and why she gave her possession to someone ….. I guess her possession was a baby . after some years we can see prince angad , he is 15 years old and prince of aryanagar . he and his friends wanted to so they went to some fair without security .
    waiting for next

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  9. Congrats for new story..
    Nice update..
    A woman Vidya is running from someone and handed over her baby to her brother and requested to save her baby..
    15 years later
    Prince Angad and his friends went to mela with out informing to king and enjoying themselves without
    any security of the soldiers..
    Waiting for next update..

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  10. Start was just like typical ancient film intro loved the way you described…so why was Vidya running and from who…she struggled all the way to hand over her precious possession to her own brother…and he was worried to see his sister in that state all she asked was to take care of her precious possession and not to worry for her…well after 15years angad is a growing prince enjoying with his friends in her fare.. leaving their soldiers back hope they reach back safely…

    Waiting to read more โค๏ธ

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  11. khwaishfan says:

    Hi Richa
    Congrats on the new story.
    Thanks for the pm and update.

    Part 1
    Fascinating update…. amazingly written
    oh no Vidya is badly hurt….
    admire her determination and bravery
    what happened to her and who is she running away from
    curious about Vidya
    though she gets hurt, she pushes herself
    great that she managed to reach the other state and meet her brother
    of cos her brother was shocked seeing her condition
    who is her brother?
    well she gave him her amanat to take care of?
    it was baby in the basket…
    was the Maan?
    as expected her brother was worried about her
    alas she assures him and then leaves
    sad that he was unable to stop her
    wonder what happened to Vidya
    well 15 years have passed
    Prince Angad is busy enjoying the fair with his friends
    so his dad King Daksh wants to see him when he returns
    Gosh Angad never told his dad where he was going
    his friend did have a point
    at least Angad informed his mom
    he is indeed scared of his dad’s anger
    glad that the security is with Angad
    not surprised that their rode their horses fast so the soldiers were far behind
    nice that enjoyed their time at the fair
    is Vidya related to Daksh?

    update soon

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  12. Congratulations ๐Ÿ‘ ๐ŸŽŠ ๐Ÿ’ ๐Ÿฅณ richu for new story
    It’s good start
    Vidya handover basket to own brother
    Surely baby ๐Ÿ‘ถ honga
    Jo laga hume
    Story take 15 years leap
    And children reached to fair
    Interesting
    Hope kissi problem me na fase ye teeno
    Apne adventure ki wajh se

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  13. Jigna Malde says:

    Amazing update.
    From whom Vidya is running n having basket.
    In basket I think is baby n that is Angad.
    Angad n his frnds gone to fair without security.
    I think something going to happen.

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  14. Nice update…
    Vidya is running from someone…
    Successfully she reached to her brother place…
    & She gave him her most important possession to take care…
    After that 15 year passed…
    Prince Angad is gone to see fair with his friends…
    They r enjoying the fair…
    But they are their without security …
    Looking forward to know what gonna happen next…
    Is King Daksh is the brother of Vidya…
    Curious to know…

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  15. Priyanka Dwivedi says:

    Nice start but iam confused… If rajkumaar is angad than who was the lady who was running… First I thought she is saving a child that too any rajkumar only but than suddenly plot changed… Now new character.. First part n mystery started… Angad n his friends ditched the sainiks now definitely going to get the scolding.. May be this gurukul is going to effect their lives greatly….

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  16. Nice story
    Since there is no mention of maan and geet yet i am assuming one of angad friend is maan?? Get a guess though

    Besides i am really curious to know how vidya or daksh are related to the main leads

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  17. Gudiyeet says:

    Vidya running madly forest area she went meet her brother he was socked seeing her this time she give basket to him take care left that place deksh want meet angad ask servant he said he enjoy with Friends angand want win what he think his friends too nice update

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  18. Zainab Sabri says:

    Oh nice you started the new one seems to be interesting looks like prince and princess story after so long baby… Yad dila de bachpan ki when I used to read the prince and princess stories.. I think the lady was trying to save her child but with whom who were behind her and after there comes a leap… Curious to know how they are connected and seems like the are connected to the main character leads… Seems like the baby was maan… Let’s what will be your plan to executed…!!

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