Dil Ka Rishta Updated Part – 1

PART  –  1

“Avita baby come on get up.” A masculine man was constantly trying to make a little baby awake.

She hides more in her duvet. “Papa it’s Sunday.” She told him.

“No it’s not. Today is Monday.” He told her and she opened one eye to see how her father’s mood is today.

She comes out of the duvet and glances at him. He kissed her forehead. “Good morning my princess.”

She palmed his stubbled cheek from her little hands. “Papa you love me?” She asked in a serious tone.

“You tell me.” He said simply.

“Papa mere achhe papa. You love me inna saraaaa…” She opened her arms wide. He nodded yes. And took her in his lap. And kissed her head.

“Tell me what you want?” He asked straight.

“Papa aaj Sunday hai na? Please say yes.” She said and he smiled while shook his head.

“Sorry sweetheart but today is not Sunday. Now get up and get ready for the school.” He refused to fall in her honey trap.

“Papa…” She stared at him with her innocent eyes. Trying her best to melt his heart.

“Your tricks not work this time. Last week you missed your school two times making me fool. But now I will not fall into your traps. Namita is coming to give you bath.” He told her.

Both heard a knock on the door before Avita say something. “Sir may I come in?” A voice asked for permission.

A 50 year old woman stood at the door entrance. “See she is here.” He told his daughter. “Come Namita.” He allowed her.

Namita is the caretaker of his mansion and Avita. She is incharge of all the servants.

“Namita, baby ko jaldi se ready kar ke niche le aao.” He commands her and she nodded.

“Come baby.” She took her inside the washroom.

She came back to the room and Namita opened her wardrobe to dress her up.

“Hello Minni. I am going to school. Okay?” Avita said bye to her Minnie bed.

He was talking over phone when his little princess came down in her school dress.

“Papa, I am ready.” She called her father.

He dropped the call and walked towards her. She was coming down slowly slowly. He took her in his arms. And she kissed her father. “Papa shave karo na. Mujhe apki beard chubti hai.” She cribbed again.

He laughed. “You know what sweetheart, when you were two year old I tried this. But that was my biggest mistake. You refused to recognise me and cried every time I took you in my arms.” He told her making serious face.

Avita was confused. She doesn’t know what to say.

“What if you again refused to accept me?”

“No I will never refused to accept my papa. I love you.” She wrapped her tiny arms around his neck.

“Come lets do breakfast and then papa will drop you to school.” He made her sit next to him. Servent serves them.

“Papa where is my mummy?” She asked suddenly and his bite struck there only.

“Why you asked again. I already told you about her.” Suddenly he got serious.

Avita glanced at her father’s stern face. Might she sensed tension on her father’s face. “Papa are you angry with me?” She feels hesitate to speak further.

He held his forehead and bow down his head to change his face expressions. Then he glanced at her. “No sweetheart. Papa will never be angry on you.” He told her.

Avita still feel hesitate. “Papa I never saw mom’s face. Can you show me her pictures?” She demanded.

It was a hard blow because he destroyed everything related to his wife, except Avita. Even after destroying everything her face reminded him the betrayal his wife gave to him. He fought with himself everyday. She left him with her 4 months old daughter. He was alone to raise Avita. She even took the savings at home. He was struggling with his new set up that time and above on her betrayal break him badly.

“Baby I don’t have her any pictures. I told you na in an accidental fire everything is destroyed.” He was trying his best to control his temper. So he will not scared the kid.

Avita nodded and lost in deep thoughts again. “Avita beta, leave all this. Papa is getting late for office. Apko school chhodne ke baad papa ko office bhi jana hai. So please hurry up. Finish this milk. Come on. Be a good girl.” He told her to distract her from the topic of her mother.

Servant kept their bags in the car. He took the keys as he wants to drive at own.

They reached to her school. “Papa,…” She glanced at him. And think about her thoughts which she wants to share with him.

“Avi what happened baby?” He asked politely.

“Papa saturday ek aunty aai thi mujhse milne.” She said hestatingly.

“Who?” His ears alerts him.

“I don’t know. As you never show me the picture of mommy….” She bow down her head as she know her mother’s topic disturbed her father.

“Avi I told you….”

“I know papa, but that lady told me she is my mommy.” Avita told him and his eyes widened with shock.

“What?”

“Yes papa, on Saturday she came at break time and met me. She said she is my mommy and she will take me along with her.” Avita told everything to him without hiding anything.

His gripped firmed on the steering wheel. He come out of the car along with Avi and straight went to Principal’s office. He sent Avita to her class so he can scold her principal. He was really angry. He couldn’t believe that she returned after whole 5 years…

19 thoughts on “Dil Ka Rishta Updated Part – 1

  1. loveaparna3011 says:

    pure n strong bond of father n daughter

    after betraying n destroying mother of avita wants to come back in their life

    avita hesitantly share how one woman claim to be her mother .

    little avita knows her father annoys in the name of her mother

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  2. Zainab Sabri says:

    beauty of father n daughter relationship… Omg she is such a cutie pie that actually she fooled him in the name of school n now ma’am know hér trick n isn’t ready to go into it… Maan wife left them… Maan isn’t ready to talk about his wife then how come he will tolerate her to be near his daughter even she told she will take her… Let’s see who is maan wife n why she betrayed him n her kid leaving behind it

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  3. Congratulations baby for new story ♥️ 🎊awesome and emotional update…… little girl avita is staying with her father , actually her father is her everything cos her mother betrayed her father and he destroyed the memories of his wife but that little girl don’t know about that so she was asking him about her mother and surely that was a sore topic for her father but her father got a shock when little avita told him that someone met her at school and claimed as her mother. loved avita and her father’s cute bond and sweet sweet moments 💖

    waiting for next

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  4. nice update..

    avita and her father bounding is lovely..

    avita asked about her mother picture but he got angry..

    he told due to fire accident all pictures are destroyed..

    Avita told some lady came and told as she is her mother and she will take avita with her..

    He is very angry as his wife betrayed him and now wants to claim his daughter..

    waiting for next update

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  5. Congratulations on a new story dear…
    The plot is so interesting so there the lil girl who loves her father immensely lives together…father pampering his daughter was the cutest…
    Alas when avita asked about her mother her father’s face was so in rage thinking about the betrayal of his wife and letting their 4 month old daughter suffer… now that the piece of information avita shared came as a shock to Maan where the lil girl said there came a woman claiming to be her mother and will take up avita with her… waiting to read more thanks for the PM dear 😍

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  6. An Emotional yet Superb Start

    Avita is she Maan’s daughter , seems like his wife betrayed him

    and left baby Avita

    though I love the bond shared by the little girl and her father

    it also seems like her mother has come back after years to claim

    Avita

    this little girl’s world is her Papa and I doubt that anyone can just come

    and claim her

    but now I’m looking forward to see who is her mother and why she betrayed

    her husband

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  7. coderlady says:

    Little Avita has already learned how to work her magic on her dad. He did not fall for it this time though. But her question about her mom threw him off. Avi is smart. She first asked for pictures of her mom to verify the claim. Good thing is she told him what happened.

    So the woman in question betrayed him, took his money, and left the child. Now she is back to claim her daughter. But she did not approach him, just went to the school directly. He is mad of course that she would do that. How did she think she could just walk in and take Avi away? She must be thinking she has enough power and resources to do that.

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  8. Wonderful story superb start story looks really interesting d story of father and daughter I hope d girl who left maan is not geet .Guess he had a bad past with his wife that is y not a single photo or anything is kept and shown to avita.Little kiddo wanna know about her mom but can’t see her dad angry and in pain and let go it .But when she was on d way to school she explained how a woman came there saying she’s her mom and will take her waiting for next to see wat happens

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  9. Priyanka Dwivedi says:

    nice concept … Is the man maan… Loved the kids bonding with him… But how can someone come to meet a child in between school…n they allowed also …. Definitely he is going to blast on principal…i

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  10. Nisha says:

    Yeeee 🎉 congratulations baby for new story 🎉🤗

    Super and interesting update baby ❤️ father daughter bond beautifully portrayed 💞 Avita and her dad are staying happily, her dad is a single parent cos avita’s mom betrayed her father and left ….. from then her dad raised her . avita is curious to know about her mother , she never saw her mother’s picture cos her father destroyed everything. her dad was shocked when she told him someone met her at school and told her she will take her away cos she was her mother .

    eagerly waiting for next part .

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  11. khwaishfan says:

    Hi Richa…. hope you are feeling better.
    Congrats on the new story.

    Thanks for the pm and update.
    sorry for late likes and comments

    Part 1
    Emotional update… beautifully written
    love the bond between Avita and her dad
    she is indeed her papa’s princess
    Avita is so cute
    her papa know her well
    of cos Avita does not want to go to school
    but her dad refuse to give into her
    Avita’s question was reasonable
    her dad’s reply was justified
    her response was understandable
    liked that he assured her
    not surprised with Avita’s question
    her curiosity regarding her mom was anticipated
    so he destroyed everything related to her mom
    upset that his mom betrayed him
    sad that she left a 4 month old Avita
    his anger and pain was natural
    well he diverted Avita
    great that Avita told her dad what happened
    oh so her mom came to the school to meet her
    Gosh she wants to take Avita with her
    as expected her dad was furious
    wonder why her mom returned after an entire 5 years

    update soon

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  12. Congratulations for your new story.

    Interesting start. Love the father and daughter bonding . Anita is so cute and very understandable at this age.

    Her mom left her when she was a baby and now she came back in her life. She is curious to know the truth as she never saw her mom.

    Luckily she told maan the everything.

    Eager to know how the story will progress now

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  13. Superbbb & intresting update …

    Beautiful bonding of father daughter…

    she is sooo cute 🥰

    she asked about her mom but her dad got angry …

    soo her mom left them & betrayed him…

    Avita told about that some aunty said she is his mom to his dad…

    i liked she told him ..

    now who is this mommy…

    curious to know …

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