Love Impossible Updated Part – 1

PART – 1

He hated parties. Granted, he wasn’t in a house full of strangers at this particular New Year’s Eve celebration; it was mostly family and friends from the town he’d grown up in. Still, he felt uncomfortable with so many people in the same place, and his confidence had been shattered when his own father told him to behave and guide him how to behave like a pure khurana blood. Every time, every single day he was reminded how fortunate he was by getting birth in such a prestigious family of the country or else he have no quality of standing there with them.

This lecture become more venomous when ever Samarth through party to show off the talent of his lovable elder son Ankush. His second child Maan Singh Khurana was his target then and he start comparing both. In which Maan only got scold and venomous words from his father.

At every step Ankush beat him and become his father’s favorite. Even in small small things they got compared and Maan only got defeat from his elder brother. His no habit made his family happy, specially his father.

“Why Maan? Can’t you see me happy for a single second?” He whispered while sipping from his glass. “What rubbish dress you wear for my party? Ha? I special send a black suit for you and what…?” He gritted his teeth in anger.

Maan smirked in such a arrogant way, as he got a satisfaction of making his father annoyed. Samarth held his forearm. “Dare you show me this arrogant behavior of yours.”

“Why you so much bother because of my outfit dad. Go to your favorite son. See he is coming in the dress you choose for him. Go to him. Why wasting your precious time on me.” Maan snapped briskly.

“Shut up. Now go and change this down market clothes of yours.” He jerked him and walked away from there.

“I don’t care.” Maan whispered in mouth and flip his drink in a go.

“What is this Maan? You still haven’t change. Go before your dad saw you in this.” A soft voice cautioned him. A very elegant woman in black saree was stood behind him. She came forward. “Son don’t you hear me.” Maan looked everywhere but not at his mother Arpita Khurana.

“Son I am taking to you.” She too got angry with him.

“Mom you are late. He already shoot me with his words.” Maan said in flat voice.

“Gosh. Maan for god sake grow up now. You are not kid any more. What you get by pissing off us at every step.”

“Leave it mom. Please.” he’d escaped to the kitchen once the food and drinks were out, relieved when he’d found it empty. Maan needed a minute to lick his wounds and recover from his parents blunt assessment of his attire.

“Bloody hell. Why I born here. All are jerks around me.” He said and cursed his fate from throwing him in this family where all only love his elder brother and forced him to be like him. Like his shadow and this made him hate his brother more.

Even in office he only got those projects which Ankush doesn’t found interested.

Guests started to filled the place and his family got lost with guests, forgetting about him completely. Maan thought to leave the party as none much bother about his presence, when the tall, elegant girl sashayed down into the party hall and he bumped into her. Everything about her was sophisticated, from her wide-tailored dove gray trousers and cream silk camisole, to the stylish earrings. Her dark hair was pulled back sleekly in a high-fashion ponytail that accentuated her sharp bone structure. She looked like a model.

“You idiot.” She yelled in annoyed voice at him.

“Excuse me. Miss you bumped on me.” He blamed her for their clash.

“Shut up you idiot.” She wants to argue but someone called her and she gave him a sharp glare before leaving.

“Geet come here.” She walked away and Maan left the party.

Geet come here my beautiful daughter.” Her father called him near and she reached to him. “Samarth meet my daughter Geet. She just arrived from London. Her father introduced her to his business friend Samarth Khurana.

“Hello.”, She greets him.

Hello Geet. So what the plan now?” He asked formally.

“I wanna join dad.” She told him.

“Great.” He felt happy and introduced her with Ankush.

“Hello Geet.” He smiled and took her hand, but instead of shaking it he brought it to his lips in an old-fashioned gesture that she found charming.

“Shall we?” Ankush took her away and both start talking like an old friends.

“Have you seen Samarth?” Rudr Pratap Handa asked while seeing their kids mingling so well.

“Don’t you think it’s so early to decide this?” Samarth asked while smile played on his perfect shaped lips.

“I know my daughter. She is very choosy and if she decides to talk this long it means she likes him.” Rudr said confidently.

“What’s going on here?” Their better halves joined them and asked about the agenda they were discussing.

Samarth told them. “Well I found this one a very good idea. By this way our families come more closer and it will be beneficial for our business too.” Arpita shared her view and Avantika got agree with her statement.

“See Rudr Ankush is leaving tomorrow for business trip for 15 days. So we can discuss it after that. What say?”

“Sure…” He got agree and they start talking about their business life.

34 thoughts on “Love Impossible Updated Part – 1

  1. Congratulations on new one.
    I was in awe of samarth of DT2 and now u made him like this.
    Maan kinda reminds me of my softy maan of RL
    But he has an attitude here. And geet she seems snobbish to me. Ankush needs to be a neutral character but seeing him kissing geet like this. It’s going to be fun definitely.

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  2. khwaishfan says:

    Congrats on the SS.

    Part 1

    magnificent update…. amazingly written.

    feeling for Maan…

    his dad is so mean… can understand Maan’s annoyance.

    Ankush seems to be the perfect son.

    hate that Maan’s dad and mom always pick on him.

    but Maan answers back!

    Geet has attitude.

    oh no so Samarth wants Ankush and Geet

    glad that Ankush is leaving for a business trip!

    update soon

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  3. kuhu18 says:

    CONGRATS for new story
    a very interesting and lovely start
    Maan is different ,Geet will be working with her dad so may be with Khuranas too
    i hope Ankush is not -ve 😉 … he is going for 15 days
    Geet and Maan parents are planning for geet and ankush
    cant wait to see how story will proceeds

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  4. Fabulous Start

    Maan seems to be the under dog in the family , it almost seems like Samrath has caused his younger son to dislike his elder brother .
    so Maan not very profound to success in any sort , Samrath wants his younger son to also be the best but seems like Maan wants to be the way he is
    but yes he has attitude too and can back answer his parents too ,
    well he feels its bad fate been born in the Khurana family
    Ankush now he seems like a gentleman , someone that has the charisma
    Geet when she and Maan bumped into each other she was angry while he was
    trying to defend himself but with Ankush it seems Geet is flattered by him

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  5. Congrats on the new as

    Superb start maan is too cool in this story feeling bad for him his dad should not compare the 2 unknowningly he is making distance between 2brothers geet s entry was to snoppish and rishta if Ankush n geet haha not possible dulha its to maan hi leke Jayega waiting for next

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  6. Nisha says:

    super update baby . it seems maan’s parents dont like him much , they loved his elder brother more and always telling maan how lucky he is to be a khurana . maan dont like it . maan and geet meeting was not so sweet . geet and maan’s family are trying to hook up geet with his elder brother ankush .
    eagerly waiting for next part .

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  7. hira20 says:

    Ah ahh maan typical baghi of the family hate campare between him and his brother
    His parent get why parent do this with second child I also face this forgive me if am biased my vote for maan
    Geet arrogance here ok
    And both perfect person ki shadi fix hori hai
    Mujhe asa q lag rah hai
    Imperfect going to win here 😉

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  8. Congratulations on your new story…
    Interesting concept….
    Maan family compared him with his brother…
    Nd he hate that…
    Liked Geet entry…
    Both families deciding their children future together…
    Looking forward for next part…
    Continue soon…

    Take care of yourself and your family tooo dear….

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  9. coderlady says:

    No two children an be the same. Why can’t the family understand that?
    The parents are out to set up geet and Ankush. She found Ankush charming and was rude to Maan. Is there no one in Maan’s corner?

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  10. Congratulations for the new one dear…well the story started well where maan is being dominated by his whole family…where he often feels irritated the way the treat and compare with his elder brother…so first impression of maaneet didn’t go well..and their parents started to matchmake geet and ankush…but after 15days then within that geet can change decision for sure😁😁 waiting to read more ❤️ 😘 do continue

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  11. It is really interesting concept . Maan is not happy the way he is being treated by his family. He doesn’t want to follow anyone which pisses his father a lot. Maan left the party after bumping with geet. So geet is impressed from maan’s elder brother. Looking forward to reading next. Waiting for next dear

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  12. awesome start baby . looks like maan’s family loves to criticize him , they are always taunting him for everything and compare him with his brother , obviously this thing irritating him . first time maan and geet met in the party and its not lovely . their parents thinking about geet and ankush (maan’s brother) alliance .
    waiting for next

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  13. ❤ ❤ yipee a new story ❤ ❤ .. Lovely sneak peak into all characters but yet to see their real nature 🙂 🙂 .. waise appearances can be super deceptive.. waiting to see how each character unfolds 🙂 🙂 knowing my jhatka queen haven't created any opinion on the characters yet :p :p ❤ ❤

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  14. ne1234 says:

    Never like comparisons between anyone…they doesn’t appreciate irrespective of their goodness,partial to one,can understand maan here,no one will be happy at these situations, looking forward to this story…

    Stay safe and take care😍❤

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  15. Priyanka Dwivedi says:

    Ooppss…. First part n twist… Maan is a neglected child… Poor guy always got criticized for everything… N here geet too neglected him n their parents are thinking for geet and arush… Now what will happen in 15 days… Waiting eagerly yo read more….

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  16. Natasha thakur says:

    Congratulations for new story n maan character is different from other stories n he father compared him from his elder son n not want understand maan only he scold her n make him feel useless n geet n meet but geet argue with him n she dancing with his brother n their family thinking about geet n ankush marriage n thnxx for pm me

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  17. loveaparna3011 says:

    congrats for new story
    maan feels suffocated with his family as they not approved his style of living which is not suiting to their status. maan’s family always neglect maan.geet become annoyed as she bump with maan . both families for alliance of geet n ankush.

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  18. mlaran852 says:

    Congrats on your new story, its very interesting!!!
    Poor maan is rejected by every single member of his family. Having to be compared all the time with his brother makes him hate his own brother.
    He found an interest in this annoying party but his family has other plans. He will be broken again and geet doesn’t seem interested.
    Waiting for more!!!

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  19. Congratulations from new story dear
    Nice update dear maan hates parties and cursing himself to non in to this family he is always comparing with his brother and got scholded from there parents not treated well by them he want to be himself and answering back to his parents

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  20. Nice update..
    Maans father compared him with his brother..
    Maan is cool ..
    Both families decided to fix Geet and samrat future together…
    Continue soon..

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  21. gudiyaeet says:

    Congrats baby
    Maan scold from his dad he didn’t wear his dad choice maan was very soft character but he too didn’t leave his father answer to him.his mom too talk to him but maan left party bumbed girl her attitude words to him.she was maan dad friend daughter .finally both parents make decisions seeing geet and maan brother talk nice update

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  22. Congrats for new story
    Interesting concept
    Maan character is different
    His father compared him with his brother
    He scolded him why he don’t wear his choice of clothes
    His mother is also not in his side
    She also scolded him
    And now Geet enters the party and poor guy bumped with her
    And she also scolded him
    Maan leave the party
    Geet meets with Ankush and mingled with him
    Their parents wants to engaged them after the return of Ankush business meeting
    Beautifully written
    Loved it

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  23. Nice start. Maan is not favorite of his parents. His father compared him with his elder brother which is not liked by Maan. Geet is sofisticated looks like a model. Samarth Khurana introduced Geet with his elder son Ankush and Geet’s father Rudr Pratap Handa is seeing prospective relation between Geet and Ankush.

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  24. mkd70 says:

    Hi interesting part ,why parents always compare own children with one another ,his father taunt him and her mother also
    Geet is different
    Waiting for next part

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  25. I don’t get it why paretnd compare thier children from one another..
    every one is different that doesn’t mean man is any different from his brother..or not intelligent.. just because he chooses to act differently he is being compared..

    and geet is just what his father expect maan to be..
    it will be interesting to see how their story will start..

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  26. Maan is right everyone around him are jerks!!
    What is with his parents..why to hate him this much and bringing competition between siblings
    Feeling bad for Maan…and it really hates when they compare you with your own sibling and taunt you 😦
    Geet is also like that..I mean more sophisticated,elite?
    Aur yeh Ankush..i don’t know why I hate him lol
    Just now they met Geet and started talking of her and Ankush engagement?Seems in their world relationships are more like business deals..
    Loved the update di 😀
    Thanks for the PM!!

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  27. Zainab Sabri says:

    Look interesting.. Wow.. I loved the Maan look… First impressions wasn’t good at all between maaneet.. Maan have to do things opposite to his dad.. His loving son who is according to his will.. The title itself is attractive…

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  28. priyanka26996 says:

    New start
    It’s amazing how maan and geet clash at their first meet
    Maan was awestruck by her beauty but nonetheless he argued with her on calling him idiot

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  29. IMA9167 says:

    Thanks for link
    First part mein hi twist
    So maan was always being compared to his perfect bro Ankush which left him feel irritated
    Both his parents only care about status but not feelings
    Yeh kya Ankush and Geet hmmm
    Let’s see how it turns out

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  30. hey,

    Just came across this. Really interesting. Just read the first Part…

    Maan’s character reminds me of Chuck from Gossip Girl, on how his father treated him and how he was mean to him all the time..In that chuck was the only child but here Maan has a sibling which he gets compared to all the time. In a lot of families this happens. Sometimes it works the other way too..Wth the youngest getting all the attention than the eldest..

    like the the sibling rivalry plot…

    Geet and Maan meeting first…Thank god…

    The parents thinking of something…lets see if their plan is gonna work or not…

    Please do share the other parts.

    thanks

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  31. Superb concept.
    Very different from others.
    Maan is very angree on his family.
    He hates his brother ankush. He is very good boy in his parents eyes.
    But maan is very different. Because of khurana tag all he doesnt have freedom. He couldn’t do what he likes.
    Oh know geets and ankush’s parents trying to make them engaged.
    Maan ka kya hoga.
    Geet aur maan ka first impresson bahot kharab tha.

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  32. Nice start
    So maan is nothing but a neglected child of his family
    This is the worst thing but how come
    Parents dont know that they are discriminating
    Their own kid they should nt be
    Even ankush s not behind and he beats him in every satte causing himself
    To be his fathers favorite
    I pity maan I thought geet wont be like that
    But she is high in herself and goes on
    Being rude with maan and now
    Geet meet ankush and their family are thinking
    About them ohhh hate them
    Hope after they return everything turns on the other side

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