Kismat Connection 4 Updated Part – 1

PART – 1

SHE was looking so beautiful exactly like an Angel descended from heaven. Handa Haveli seems like a newly Wed bride and why not. After all she a grand daughter of Village’s sarpanch(head).

Daarji is a respected person not only for his family but for whole village. His words were command for everyone. No one can argue with him on any point.

She was sitting on small stool, looking herself in mirror. When Daarji came inside. “Kudio jara bahar jao.” He commands all the friends and cousins of Geet to leave her alone for a while. All girls vacate the room on his command. Geet stood up to touch his feet.

He held her before she bow down. “Nai puttar ji.” He kissed on her forehead. “Kisi ki nazar na lage mere puttar ko.” He blessed her. “Dekh puttar ab tu dusre ghar ja rahi hai. Main janta hu meri bachhi bahut syani hai. Par beta kabhi aisa koi kaam na karna jisse tere Daarji ka sir jhuke. Tu maan(honor) hai mera.” His voice were wriggling in his throat as lump formed inside, due the heaviness cause by the emotions.

“Daarjiโ€ฆ” She whimpered and hides herself in her grandfather’s embrace.

“Mera bachha. Aaj main bahut khush hu. Sunjay bahut achha ladka hai.” Her grandfather showing his happiness again and again.

“Geet tu tyar hui k nahi?” Her mother’s voice grabbed their attention. She too came inside to check upon her.

“Daarji aap, yaha?” Avantika saw her father in law and quickly correct her scarf and to cover her head properly.

“Puttar ji main apne bachhi ko dekhne aaya tha. Kyunki aaj to ye chale hi jayegi.” The pain of separation was mixed with the feel of happiness.

Avantika caressed her daughter’s head and quickly put a black mark behind her ear to safe her from all evil eyes.

“Chalo putar ji baraat aati hogi.” He said and both left Geet alone in the room.

All are busy in the hustle bustle of marriage. Haveli was full of guests. While one person was standing secretly behind the bushes at the backside. His eyes were fixed on the window of one room.

“Damn Adi what I am doing because of you.” He just cursed one person in breath and came out. He plugged in the edge of the static rope and checked before he started climbing up with its help. Soon he jumped into the room and Geet’s eyes widened seeing a complete stranger in her room. Before she shouts and calls theed whole haveli in her room, he suppressesssed her mouth.

“Please don’t shout. I am not coming here to harm you. Mujhe Adi ne bheja hai. Don’t worry everything goes fine very soon. Come let’s go.” He said but she was afraid of him and didn’t understand what rubbish he was talking aboutg.

“Ummโ€ฆ ummmโ€ฆ” She nodded no in pace and trying to come out of his hard clutches.

She stopped on his feet and he freed her mouth, giving a chance to screamโ€ฆ “Daarjiโ€ฆ” She screamed but next moment her mouth was again suppressed by the stranger.

“Have you gone mad. I am here to help you. To take you to your lover and you creating problem for us.” He scolds her and she trying to pushed him away.

He got angry on her and used his martial arts skills to made her unconscious. He now carried her like a sack on his shoulder. “Damn ye sirf dekhne me slim hai. How much weight she have.” He was cursing both Geet and Adi.

He quickly tied her with him so he can carried her through rope. But her screams alert her Daarji. He just welcomed the groom and his guests when he heard a scream of Geet.

“Rudr puttar idhar aa.” he called his son quickly. “Puttar ik vari ja or Geet ko dekh.” He told him to check Geet once again.

“Ji Daarji.” He obeyed and quickly went upstairs to check his daughter. “Geet beta you ready?” He called her daughter but got nothing. He went inside and saw the room empty. He checked everywhere and found nothing.

“Kya hua ji?” Avantika too came to see her daughter.

“Avanti tune Geet ko dekha? Wo kahi nahi hai.” He asked in a worried tone and both stare each other.

“Yahi hogi ji.” She too start looking for her.

“Ha par nahi hai. Main sab jagah dekh chuka hu.” Rudr was so tensed seeing his daughter missing.

Soon the news spread like a fire when her parents don’t found her anywhere in haveli. Gradually all start searching her but she was miss placed and all start gossiping about her.

Hoshiarpur wasn’t very developed in terms of modernity. They still believe in old values and traditions. Daarji’s anger was on peak. It was the first shameful moment for him in his lifetime. Till the date he lived a king size life. No one cares to look into his eyes directly and now the same people stared him with question filled eyes.

He really wanna killed Geet. Geet who was his heartbeat but today she brought shame for allโ€ฆ. She ran away on the day of her weddingโ€ฆ

23 thoughts on “Kismat Connection 4 Updated Part – 1

  1. Superbbb update….
    Geet is ready for her marriage…
    Every one is happy specially Darji…
    He came to geet room to give advice to her….
    Maan kidnapped Geet from his house …
    Every one thought she ran away from her marriage…
    Geet Darji who loves her sooo much now get sooo angry & want to kill her…
    Excited for next part….
    Continue soon…

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  2. monikaranidr5 says:

    Congratulations on your new storyโคโค!!

    The story starts off with Geet about to wed Sanjay.
    Geet has a lovely family and she is the apple in their eyes. She seems to be the ladli and very close to her Darji.
    All of them are very happy with her wedding.
    But wrong entry of Maan changes everything.
    He gatecrashed Geet’s room through her room window to take her along with him saying that he is doing this for Adi and comforting her that everything will be alright..
    Geet being confused hearing Adi’s name is clear that Maan is in the wrong address and kidnapping the wrong person๐Ÿ˜‚.
    So this makes it clear that Adi was in love with someone and she was also getting married, Maan the superhero to help Adi get his love bumped into Geet misunderstanding her to be Adi’s lover, takes her along with him instead of Adi’s real lover.

    Geet struggles alot to free herself from him which angered Maan so he made her unconscious using his martial arts and carried her like a sack complaining about her weight..

    But hell broke loose when Geet’s family finds Geet missing and rumors about her running away from her marriage angers Darji..he who took Geet to be his pride is angry at her to such an extent that he wants to kill her for tarnishing his honor.. Geet was his pride right, I feel he should have trusted her for he knew her from she was born but guess he is blinded by shame and anger because of Geet… Will he ever try to think of it in a right way because he was the only one who heard Geet scream??

    Please continue soonโ˜บ..
    Eagerly waiting to know what will happen next as Maan has a wrong person with him..non the less it will be fun to read further

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  3. Fascinating and Captivating Start

    Geet has to get married , her Darji is very proud of her
    and his loves comes out so easily for her .
    while Geet awaits her groom
    it almost seems like Maan made some mistake by taking Geet
    as he tells her , her lover awaits her .
    though it was great seeing Geet trying to defend herself and call
    for help .
    but Maan knowing Tai Chi did a move and she became unconscious
    wonder now what will actually happen

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  4. loveaparna3011 says:

    congrats for new season
    geet is kidnapped on her wedding day but her darji thinks she run away.
    as darji heard geet call he must not think like this for geet .
    geet is proud of darji so he is with mix emotion happy as well as sad for separation with geet.

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  5. Priyanka Dwivedi says:

    Nice start… I think maan mistook geet as adi lover but where is he.. Why not adi come with him.. In first part only geet became culprit of her family because of someone else mistake… Will Handa family not even try to search for her… Not trying to know what exactly happened..

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  6. khwaishfan says:

    Congrats on the new SS! Thanks for the pm and update…

    Part 1
    Captivating updateโ€ฆ amazingly written
    so Geet is getting married
    she indeed looks like an Angel
    so Geet is her Darji’s honour
    of cos she, her mom and darji are emotional
    there is happiness and pain of separation
    oh a stranger came to take Geet
    as expected she was confused and screamed for her darji
    alas she was stopped
    great that she tried to free herself
    he told her he came to take her to her lover
    well they have the wrong girl
    Gosh Geet was kidnapped
    she was made unconscious
    it seems like Maan kidnapped Geet for Adi
    at least Darji heard Geet’s scream
    not surprised that they cannot find Geet
    sad that they assume Geet ran away on her wedding day
    now the news spread like wildfire
    ahh darji wants to kill Geet
    hate that Geet though no fault of hers is being blamed

    update soon

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  7. Nice update..
    Geet is getting ready for her marriageโ€ฆ
    Darji came to geet room to see her and he felt very happy..
    Maan came to take away geet but she is not ready to go with stranger, but maan kidnapped Geet from her house โ€ฆ
    Every one thought she ran away from her marriageโ€ฆ
    Darji was very much angry & want to kill geet for making humiliation in front of villagers..
    Waiting for next update..

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  8. Wow wonderful start of d story looks interesting but if geet was in luv with someone then y she was getting married to sanjay and geet loves adi Or what maan taking her from there geet didn’t want to go but maan took her with him now that created a mu in d eyes of darji for geet waiting to see what will he do when geet will come back looking forward for this story.

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  9. Nisha says:

    Congratulations baby for new story ๐Ÿฅณ
    super update โ€ฆ.. it was geetโ€™s marriage and her family was very happy specially her darji cos he loves her so much , geet was his pride but everything messed up when one stranger kidnapped geet , he thought geet was adiโ€™s lover so without asking anything to geet he kidnapped her . other side her family and all thought she ran away , her darji was very angry .
    eagerly waiting for next part .

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  10. Congrats for new season
    Geet is getting married
    She is a loving child of a family Daar ji getting emotional to see her as a bride
    Everyone is busy in the house
    Then Maan comes to Geet’s room and kidnapped her assuming Adi’s lover
    Other side everyone thinks Geet ran away from her house
    Dear ji is getting very angry with her

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  11. Beginning is awesome so it’s geet’s marriage day and her darji who is head of villages is a respectful person and loves his granddaughter too..and is sad she will be going to another home and advice geet to not do anything that brings harm to his respect but unfortunately there came person who is thinking geet to be adi’s lover and wants to unite her with him…but poor girl didn’t understand anything and screams and the family is alerted but it was so late geet was already taken and daarji is ashamed…what will happen next… waiting to read more โค๏ธ thanks for the PM dear

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  12. Zainab Sabri says:

    Interesting start of the story… Geet is precious on her family but after this incident they took as her honour killing… If she was in love then when adi came to take her why she was shouting… I think they took the wrong girl… Let’s see start tog bht hee interesting se hain… Liked the family scene when geet got ready… Now daarji took as a shamed for his ego pride… I don’t get it that why he wasn’t able to trust his brought up?? Geet pretty n innocent looks is just awesome..

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  13. ne1234 says:

    Poor geet without any knowledge of what really happened she comes in the radar or unfortunate things,now all people are angry on her,what will they do,is they are going to give her a chance once they met her,and who was the real person for he came there,his one mistake is going to make her life hard, looking forward to further..
    ๐ŸŒผ๐Ÿค

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  14. So picked the wrong bride..
    but now geet darji will be thinking that geet ran away
    And how will she explain the whole senario to him??
    if maan have to take the responsibility will he do the same??
    And what he do when heโ€™ll get to know that he kidnapped wrong bride? ๐Ÿ˜…

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  15. Congrats baby for new story ๐ŸŽ‰ awesome update . geet’s marriage was fixed with some sunjay and looks like he was her family’s choice . her darji was so excited and happy but her family’s happiness faded away when they came to know geet was missing …..they thought she ran away , her darji was very angry cos he thought geet tarnished his ego and pride . they don’t know it was not geet’s fault …… some stranger kidnapped her cos he thought she is his friend adi’s lover .
    waiting for next .

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  16. Gudiyeet says:

    Geet ready like angel her darji was sarpench of whole village all peoples followed his words no one against him he ask geet after marriedshe will get good girl in her sasural not bad opinions about him her mom came ask her she was OK her marriage both are blessing geet after both are left one strange man come out bushes cursed adi he climbed geet room cover her mouth told he he came for helping her because adi but geet f
    Try freed from him shouting darji Stanger using his Tai chi unconcerned her took her his shoulder again using rope climbing from her room darji called rudra ordered him watching geet her room but he was shocked can’t see geet whole family anger to herdarji shamed her want kill her broken his name

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  17. Heyy.. I am reading your ff after a veryyy long time,, and recently finished GHSP episodes, ๐Ÿ’ซand loved maan geet again and againnnnnnn… And then tada your ff came
    It’s interesting that geet is getting married without her will but their is some mystery agar wo kisi ko pasnd krti ha to aisa q kr rhi hai and why she is not recognizing the person who is reuniting her with lover ๐Ÿค”ahmm seems fishy waiting for twist. And continue soon

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  18. coderlady says:

    Oh no. He kidnapped a girl for his friend but got the wrong girl. He should have thought about why she was resisting. If she was the right girl, hearing her lover’s name would have shut her up. But she was fighting him and he didn’t give her a chance to even open her mouth. He was good at her task, but bad at normal logic.

    Being a small village, darji will face a lot of questions and shame from the society. Geet’s name will be tarnished. No one will marry her now. No matter what story is told, people will talk.

    What will Maan do once he discovers that he got the wrong girl? Bring her back home? That will not be easy. We can see whats coming. They will be forced to get married to save her reputation and honor.

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  19. Congratulations…

    Interesting start…

    Geet is abducted from her own wedding. She is being blamed for no fault of her’s..

    This is definitely a case of mistaken identity. He abducted Geet in place of someone else. Maan did a grave mistake. Hope he owns up to his deeds..

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